My teacher couldn't have picked a better blog prompt that flash fiction. I'm so excited! Basically this is going to be the shortest, short story in the short time this shilly blog has ever shtarted (I ran out of sh-words).
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But what if I'm glad
That my rhyming is bad?
(Dr Seuss eat your heart out) |
I was walking down the street, sun shining, birds singing, when I saw him. It was like the heavens had opened and made a light to shine down on him alone. Everything and everyone else faded away as I looked into his hazel eyes, the light shining through his light brown hair and making him glow. His brow was furrowed as he looked at me, like he'd seen me somewhere before. He shrugged, he must've been imagining it, and walked away. I felt a twinge of disappointment, I was expecting him to feel something too. But as I watched him slowly disappear I knew he was the one. The first boy I would ever kill.
TTFN! That's tata for now!
Very morbid haha but good. I love stories with an unexpected turn at the end. Started out as what seemed to be a love story in the making and ended up being completely twisted and disturbing! In a good way of course. Nice work!
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